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Quick Jazz Edit I did

Doublea

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Like I said, it was quick. I'll need to go back and see if I can do anything about that doe.

Can the tail of the note come out just a tiny bit from behind the right side of Burks? Feel like it could/should. Looks great.
 
Would look better without obscuring Burks' lower body.
 

Not sure if this is what you are going for, but is the negative space between Burks and the Note suppose to be an "A"? Then Burks' body could represent a "Z". It would be cool if you could put another fade version of Burks for a second "Z". I don't know if that would work visually, but it would be interesting to see if you could pull it off and make it work.
 
Yeah it should, but I used this previous edit that I did and the Jazz note wasn't fully there.

burksjazz.jpg

I'd say position the note so that the ball is in front of "We are Utah" and have the "flag" part of the note above the text.
 
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